James Potter Tue May 31, 2011 2:18 pm
(Sorry, this isn't as good as the first rev. I had, but I nicked the back button on my mouse and lost it. Did as best I could to reconstruct it. Doing posts in notepad first then copying here from now on.)
*James smiled into the kiss again, pulling back just far enough to speak softly, his eyes on hers, feeling like he could fall into the emerald abyss of her gaze.*
Never.
*Inside, something started to nag at him. A new feeling in his mind, something that he couldn't quite place. He was again distracted by, what was to him, the goddess-like beauty before him, kissing her again. He had swarms of girls wanting to be with him, but none were like her. She was real, she was pretty, and she was a challenge. Sure, he loved the attention from the others and knew he warranted it, but it just wasn't the same somehow. Many a girl will be jealous or even resentful of her and he knew it. Sure, he had an arrogant streak, but about that he was indeed correct*
I..love you too, Lily.
*They had only just admitted they had feelings for each other, but he already felt very strongly for her, having wanted her for so long, as much as a 15 year old kid could understand at least. He was perfectly content to keep her in his arms, but that nagging feeling came again more distinctly. Perhaps something to do with the...ability...he and his friends had gained over the summer. In a word, instinct. He had always had it, but somehow it seemed sharper now than before. Something was wrong and he knew it, drawing back gently from Lily's kiss and noticing the others were gone. How had he missed that!? Leaving without a word? That was very unlike them. He looked around and got up, his expression one of concern. The lovey-dovey air about him having all but disappeared with the worry about his brothers. They still were priority number one with him*
Where did Remus and Sirius go? How did I miss them leaving? Why would they do that without saying anything?
*They would know that he was just thinking aloud as he often did when trying to figure things out, but to the untrained ear, it seemed as if he was actually asking the questions. He looked back to Lily*
I don't mean to be rude, but I need to find them and make sure things are alright. You can come along if you like, or stay here where it's warm, it's up to you.
*he didn't wait more than a second for a reply before heading to the door out into the snow. For all he knew with what's been going on, they could be in danger or worse, and he was fiercely protective. He would apologize later if Lily didn't understand, which was most likely since he just dropped everything and took off out the door cloak flaring behind him, but he couldn't ignore it. She was getting a little bit of an inside look at how things were in the Marauders just then. Sink or swim. He started down the road through the snow, cursing at it under his breath now while trying to find his brothers, glasses promptly clouding like before and making his vision blur*
Where the bleeding hell did they get off to...
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